Consuming literally everything cause the online shopping sites improve and today there are countless online shopping websites all around the world. There are pros and cons on this subject as in every occasion and I would like to start with the advantages of online shopping.
There are a good deal of benefits of online shopping because it provide us to see a various kinds of any product from anywhere. Moreover, we can learn and share the comments of the products by only using internet. We don't have to waste our energy or time to go anywhere, we just click on whatever we want and less then in a second we reach everything in details. It is a great comfort that the things that we bought online come to our houses in a short time. Because in daily life people get really busy to look for a need or a lux from malls, markets, shops or else. Therefore, online shopping adds and websites are their best friend to keep their life go on. Furthermore, there are special discounts for online buyers which open a way to save money. Another advantage is that we can buy many things from abroad since global firms take place in this industry. There are many people who import their stuff from online shopping sites since they want to try new food, make up, clothing and many others. Besides, there are people who needs a sufficient drug, cream, medicine, oil and so on to live in peace and healthy.
However, there are unwanted situations at online shopping, too. For instance, some people can be addicted to buy things even if they don't need to. This is one of the worst scenario for a person to get poorer and lose self control. It doesn't mean that we have to buy things just because it is on sale and there is a great deal of discount. We must be aware of the fact that we should buy the stuff that we can effort otherwise it could be on the control of our lives. Another disadvantage is that there are many frauds out there and they can copy the original product page, take your money but don't give the product or send an other thing that you didn't order. Moreover, many of these sites do not accept return. Personally, the worts disadvantage of online shopping is that sometimes our packages could get lost at the urgent times or receive as broken or in an unsatisfactory way. Nobody wants to give their money for nothing and if we buy something then we would like to have it in a proper way. However, sending firms can be careless and it could create problems at times.
As a conclusion, online shopping is in a huge place in our lives and it is undeniable that it makes shopping easier for all our us. However, it is important to keep that in mind that there are also bad sides of this good convenience therefore, it is our responsibility to be in charge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
...s of online shopping. There are a good deal of benefits of online shopping because ...
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Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
... benefits of online shopping because it provide us to see a various kinds of any produc...
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Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'kind'?
Suggestion: kind
... because it provide us to see a various kinds of any product from anywhere. Moreover,...
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Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the products by only using internet. We dont have to waste our energy or time to go ...
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Line 2, column 314, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...just click on whatever we want and less then in a second we reach everything in deta...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... be addicted to buy things even if they dont need to. This is one of the worst scena...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...to get poorer and lose self control. It doesnt mean that we have to buy things just be...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ginal product page, take your money but dont give the product or send an other thing...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...money but dont give the product or send an other thing that you didnt order. Moreover, m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...product or send an other thing that you didnt order. Moreover, many of these sites do...
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Line 3, column 857, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unsatisfactory way" with adverb for "unsatisfactory"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he urgent times or receive as broken or in an unsatisfactory way. Nobody wants to give their money for n...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...something then we would like to have it in a proper way. However, sending firms can be careless...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 7.0 371% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 6.8 324% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 3.15609756098 475% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 5.60731707317 1070% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 33.7804878049 192% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 965.302439024 233% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 507.0 196.424390244 258% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44378698225 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 3.73543355544 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36859896957 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 106.607317073 230% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483234714004 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 283.868780488 256% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 8.94146341463 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2781835442 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 3.70975609756 404% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27311448384 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751266633458 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860573959041 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198301207447 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937077188485 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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