The amount of money that children’s charity in located in USA spent and received in one year ,2016
The two pie charts below indicates, The units of finicial donations probably to the child one and how difference among one year,2016
Over all, it's clear that the most significant features specially in Revenue sources in donated food is a community contributions accounted by 10.4% and it's a aswell one compared by the second chart.More over , the highest category of the second chart was fundraising accounted by 2.6%.
In stark contrast, The total general section in 2016.would be community contributions How ever, The lowest category had opted 0.2% it was program revenue and investment in come .How ever , the other come was 0.4%,The The maintaining was in the same level as Investment and Government grants.
The charts illustrates the variations among one year, The total number of Fundraising was higher than program revenue bacause fundraising was 2.6% .The variations was moderate . However, The majority of Management and general donations was 1.6% it also swift . Substantially.The change among this year was a slight change.Dontaing program services was Rapid change by 95.8% compared by Revenue sources it was 86.6% .on the other hand, The finicial in the same year was mild .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32804232804 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97781591231 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566137566138 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.33902439024 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.370625599 43.030603864 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.4 112.824112599 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8 22.9334400587 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 5.23603664747 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 1.69756097561 1414% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848211278884 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461580182797 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345384065848 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669666617187 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575801086144 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.2329268293 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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