The average annual expenditure of college students from three countries

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The average annual expenditure of college students from three countries.

The table below illustrates the total spending and the living costs of students who are studying in college in three specific nations compared with the average annual.

Overall, it is evident that college students in country A had the most total spending. Additionally, the percentage of money students in all three countries spend the majority on was accommodation and food.

As can be seen from the chart, country A was leading in terms of total spending with $5000, followed by a slightly lower than that of country B, by $50. An opposite trend was true for country C, where they spent only $1500 for college students.

Regarding different living costs, the expenditure on accommodation accounted for 45% of the total spending of students in country A, while the figures for country B and country C were lower than that, at 35% and 20% respectively. However, the second most spending on food, students in country A spent the least, at only 22%, by contrast the percentage of country C was significantly higher than that, at 36%. The expenditure on books in country A was slowly, at just only 3%, similarly with country B with 9% and the figure for country B was three as low as the proportion of country C. Finally, students in country A and B spend on leisure the same at approximately 23%, and double the percentage of country C.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...penditure on accommodation accounted for 45% of the total spending of students in...
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... and double the percentage of country C.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, regarding, second, similarly, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87068965517 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78637706462 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491379310345 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.154051308 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.555555556 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396889952526 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178560292657 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053047849243 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242870597042 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472138424353 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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