Average number of hours per week spent doing activities around the home
The bar graph shows average number of hours per week spent doing activities around the home by men and women.
Women spent more number of hours in cooking, cleaning the house, washing up and reading, while they number of hours in gardening, surfing the internet and watching television less than men.
Higher number of hours, women spent their activities in cooking, and the second in washing up and the end in gardening. While higher number of hours men spent their activities in watching television, and the second in surfing the internet and the end in gardening. Gardening activities get smallest number of hours among all activities, while watching television activities get….
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the smallest'.
Suggestion: get the smallest
... end in gardening. Gardening activities get smallest number of hours among all activities, w...
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Discourse Markers used:
['second', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.338709677419 0.268076937826 126% => OK
Verbs: 0.137096774194 0.116061578633 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0645161290323 0.0759168565197 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0 0.0366838410393 0% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0241935483871 0.0131127313244 185% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.177419354839 0.155750635184 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0887096774194 0.0379272487307 234% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.54631635313 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0161290322581 0.00175180941692 921% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0806451612903 0.0948980150116 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 685.0 1161.00487805 59% => OK
No of words: 111.0 196.9 56% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17117117117 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.24586718041 3.73763899035 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387387387387 0.337110787985 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261261261261 0.247514529752 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207207207207 0.171178102325 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117117117117 0.112407865282 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54631635313 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 52.0 106.607317073 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468468468468 0.546246751206 86% => OK
Word variations: 31.5459256704 49.3433353143 64% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0337734372 42.9750493124 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 135.714022679 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.689975730869 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 48.3261261261 47.7609492067 101% => OK
Elegance: 3.75 2.94281807926 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470050389132 0.418131533498 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.47442396839 0.181151798455 262% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.232777845168 0.0850326197045 274% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.84566532422 0.706616315825 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186557375876 0.157042692854 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.330471192129 0.228904883108 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184404676999 0.108899403657 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.473532923875 0.367819155151 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.141895068126 0.0812612215331 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.414839707785 0.316326947829 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20169624746 0.0921553760075 219% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 50.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 4.5 Out of 9