The given bar chart illustrates the average amount of time per week which is spent on doing activities aroung the home by male and female .
Overall , while women have a tendency to do household chores, men are likely to use their time for recreational activities such as surfing the internet and watching tv on the whole .Nevertheless , the number of hours spent on reading by people of both sexes are comparatively equal.
When it comes to housework , cooking is predominantly a task undertaken by women rather than men as they need to use 15 hours for doing this task , compared to 8.5 of their male counterparts. As for washing up , female who are surveyed say that it takes them 7.5 to do the washing up while it only takes men 5 per week .The figures for both sexes reading are fairly similar , at aroung 5 . the amount of time spent on cleaning the house by female is 5 , which is double as much as the figures for male.
Turning to leisure activities , the most prominent is watching tv as both men and women spend most of their time doing this activity , at 14 and 12.5 respectively . A dramatic difference is witnessed in the amount of time which is spent on surfing the internet , which are 12.5 for men and 4.5 for women . It seems that gardening is done least when it only accounts for a few hours , around 3 per week for both sexes.
- Some people believe that studying online is more effective than studying on campus while others disagree Discuss both the views and provide your opinion 67
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 89
- Some people say that traffic accidents are caused by the increasing number of motorbikes Others blame for man s fault Which point of view do you agree 89
- Students learn far more with their teachers than other sources Internet or television To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Average number of hours per week spent doing activities around the home 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, while, as for, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47131147541 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54665328852 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487704918033 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8961246218 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.375 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293398365825 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134233868083 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103554967239 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211381797203 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984516508269 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.