ĐỀ BÀI: The line graph shows the number of people who used different communication services in the world.
Units: per 100 inhabitants
The given line graph depicts the number of people using 5 different kinds of services for communication purposes throughout the world over the period of 10 years from 1998 to 2008.
Overall, it is clear that the use of all means of communication surveyed showed an upward trend between 1998 and 2008, and Cellular phone service saw the most exponential rise in the number of people who used it as the way of communication.
In 1998, landline service was the most common method of communication in the world with around 15 users out of 100 people on average. The figures for cellular service and internet service were much lower at about 5 per 100 inhabitants, and there were almost no people using Fixed broadband and Mobile broadband in this year.
The number of Cellular phone service users, however, increased dramatically in the years latter, surpassing that of landline service in 2002 before reaching a peak at about 60 out of 100 inhabitants at the end of the period shown. Similarly, a rise was also seen in the cases of Internet service and Landline service with approximately 20 per 100 inhabitants in 2008 for each. The figures for Fixed broadband and Mobile broadband increased marginally but remained just under 5 per 100 inhabitants in the same year.
- ĐỀ BÀI: The line graph shows the number of people who used different communication services in the world.Units: per 100 inhabitants 67
- The line graph shows the number of people who used different communication services in the world.Units: per 100 inhabitants 61
- The line graph shows the number of people who used different communication services in the world Units per 100 inhabitants 74
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90740740741 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75601039157 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4959055627 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.428571429 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422340691882 0.215688989381 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190422649821 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715813143181 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25680310782 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472949595678 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.