The chart illustrates figures of national and overseas students pursuing Computer Science at UK University between the time period 2010 to 2012.
Overall, the number of students increased over time period as well as British students were larger than international students in all three years (2010, 2011 and 2012).
In terms of domestic students, at the beginning of the period, there were 39 male and 32 female tutee. After the following year, male students (24) decreased by 16, whereas the number of female rose to 44. The number of students accounted the highest with 88 students consisting 42 male and 45 female.
On the other hand, the figures of international students were lesser than those of domestic students. There were 20 male and 16 female in the year 2010. The numbers rose for both sexes in the year 2011, with 22 and 18 male and female scholar respectively. At the end of the period, international students substantially increased and reached its peak (39 students) for boys but the number of girls was only 20.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'tutee' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tutees'.
Suggestion: tutees
...eriod, there were 39 male and 32 female tutee. After the following year, male studen...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'scholar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'scholars'.
Suggestion: scholars
...r 2011, with 22 and 18 male and female scholar respectively. At the end of the period,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, well, whereas, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65949789485 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3999334663 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260543387599 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117124192383 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115779607918 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115683147252 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109506691332 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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