The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.
The column chart illustrates which amount of people live in cities all around the world and separately in different continents.
Overall,each column gives the percentage of three varaity if years, the middle of the last century, the beginning of that and with the prediction for 2030. It is clearly seen that in each region the number of people increased and will continue to increase in the nearest future.
To start with, we can compare two of the groups of Asian and African population, there it was the lowest percent in the 1950, then it were rising but it will not be equal with other parts of the world even in the future. To contrast of the first two groups there are other columns which represent the Europe, Latin American and North American population. These regions were not growing as those continents, however, it started with highest points around the half or more percent. By the predictions for 2030 population of these three continents which will live in urban areas will be close to 80-90 percent overall. In case of the whole world in the last century it was not even the third of the population, but we can see that in the future more than the half if the people will move to cities.
To sum up, population on the whole planet decades by decades prefer more to move to the urban areas all around the world, but in some parts the percent is growing faster than in others.
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- The bar chart gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010 78
- These diagrams illustrate the present layout of the center of a town named Islip and the future plan of it 67
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but, first, however, if, so, then, third, on the whole, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60240963855 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34796578758 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506024096386 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.3075498572 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211274804213 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825669325793 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745997122697 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139822412102 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659520223421 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.