The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownerships in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The bar graph illustrates information about the number of Chinese who used vehicles between 1987 and 1999.
Overall, the most amount of vehicles was observed in 1999, whereas the least number was in 1987.
Approximately 300 thousand people used vehicles in 1999 and there was a steady increase and 1 million people were till 1993. The reason for this result was likely to be that having a car was expensive in that time, also people preferred for more common activity such as walking and cycling.
However, in 1995 there was a drastic rise which equal to 3 million people who used their own cars, by following this after two years it is increase to 1 million and reached to about 4.2 million people by 1999. This reflect the fact that people purchased more cars due to the longer distance of workplace or having journey with their family during holiday periods.
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- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 56
- For all children, the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write. How far do you agree with suggestion? How important is it for a child to learn to play a musical instrument, in your view? 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... whereas the least number was in 1987. Approximately 300 thousand people used v...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h their family during holiday periods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81333333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32062252184 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4595747362 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835794104077 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506898232283 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525554683816 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676554691053 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567292333447 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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