The bar chart shows five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in the years of 2009 and 2019 with a projection for 2029.
The finance industry has been the biggest contributor to Brazil’s economy for 2009 and 2019. The data further indicates that the finance industry will also have the biggest share percentage for the year 2029. In 2009, the Finance industry's percentage share was the highest at approximately 32%. Whereas the second position was shared by the tourism and oil, coal and gas industries at approximately 26%. The manufacturing industry's ratio was at 21% and the lowest ratio was of the food processing industry at 10%.
For the year 2019, the Finance industry was once again the leader at approximately 36% and this year oil, coal, and gas industry ratio increased to approximately 31%. The food processing and tourism industry had the same percentage at 21% while the manufacturing industry’s ratio decreased to 16%.
The projections for 2029 indicate that the Finance industry ratio will increase to 41% making it the highest contributor toward Brazil's economy. However, the oil, coal, and gas industry's ratio will decrease to 26%. A similar trend can be seen for manufacturing and food processing industries as their ratios will decrease to 5% and 10% respectively. The tourism industry's ratio will remain at 21%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25454545455 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92071541106 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468181818182 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0058917299 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241691728 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128892223104 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125309381169 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224928867868 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161845397786 0.0819641961636 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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