The bar chart presents the actual and projected share of the economy of Brazil held by five key business features in 2009, 2019, and 2029.
Overall, finance will continue the most important industry in the future whereas the manufacturing industry experiences a sharp decrease in the given period. Moreover, there is a significant percentage of food processing, tourism, and fossil fuel industry as well.
Firstly, when it comes to the actual statistics of the 5 mentioned features, the financial industry has undergone a stable rise from over 30 percent up to over 35 percent in 2009 and 2019. At the same time, the food processing and the fossil fuels industries both dramatically increase from 10% to 20% and from 25% to over 30% respectively in 2009 and 2019. In contrast, the manufacturing and the tourism industry witnessed a drop from over 20% to over 15% and from over 25% to 20% respectively.
Secondly, moving to the percentage forecast in 2029, it is oblivious that the financial percentage keeps surging to over 30 percent while all other features’ proportions are projected to decrease with an exception of stability of tourism figures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, well, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07894736842 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92949940416 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1914973541 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.857142857 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 5.23603664747 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195241739438 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101335580217 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095479449086 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147193699495 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104665232641 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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