The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organisations

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organisations.

The bar chart compares five different organisations in terms of investment in machinery, building, staff training and research.

Overall, organisation B spends a higher budget on these categories compared to the others, while organisations D and E invested the least. In addition, the spending pattern of organisation C is the most different from the remaining ones.

Looking at organisations A and B, it can be seen that each of them allocates more than €1 billion for building, employee training and research, with the former investing the most in building (€1.5 billion) and the latter spending the most (€1.9 billion) providing training for its workers. Machinery is the least invested category in both organisations, €1 billion and €0.9 billion respectively.

Turning to organisations D and E, the largest investment goes to the building category, with each devoting €1 billion, while funding for research is the lowest, €0.6 and €0.7 billion accordingly. In organisation C, however, the highest funding is for machinery and research (€1.3 million each), whereas the figures for building and staff training are lower, €1 and 0.8 billion respectively.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, look, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08846419942 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.163538953 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.714285714 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22592397748 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126773877093 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615561345235 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163389687902 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064027178074 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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