It is the best tp accept bad situation in our life such as unsatisfactory jobs or shortage of money. Dicuss bith views, and give your own opinion
The majority of people believe that the finest way to solve difficult problems in our life is to accept them, whilst others endeavor to make effort to overcome those adversities. In my point of view, I choose to accept the bad troubles because of useful lessons and skills which I can learn from.
On the one hand, some of people are sastified with their current situations to have a peaceful life and stable jobs because they know clearly their limitations and they cannot change them. Nowadays, for example, lots of people can’t find jobs which suitable for their majors or their hobbies. But they still accept this to receive unexpected salaries to pay for their daily living expenses which they consider are really vital and necessary. Hence, they advocate that accepting their current situations is the better solutions for them.
However, there is a large number of sanguine individuals who strongly contended that if they attempt their best to improve the problems in positive ways, they will get more better things than giving up. Furthermore, their effort can help them increase their lives higher than before with suitable jobs and expected wages. Besides, if the troubles are solved themselves, they will have enough confidence to face with others similar troubles.
In conclusion, even though many people are pleased with their lives, from my perspective, everyone should spend more effort and time to handles the adversities and believe that we can change and overcome the challenges.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...ich I can learn from. On the one hand, some of people are sastified with their current situat...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... solutions for them. However, there is a large number of sanguine individuals who strongly conte...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...roblems in positive ways, they will get more better things than giving up. Furthermore, the...
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Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can change and overcome the challenges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43614322976 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604081632653 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4005896185 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10061440114 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456333606693 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332169362197 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613786687835 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473169434221 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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