The given bar graph illustrates the figure for the accommodation chosen by British when they went on holiday in 2010 with 4 different types: self-catering, caravan, camping, and hotel.
It is clear that the proportion of people from England and Scotland are merely the same. Hotel was the most preferred type of accommodation. Varying from approximately 52% to 55% in these two regions, it accounted for almost twice the percentage of people having chosen self-catering (almost 30%). Camping and caravan were the far less preferred by people in England with about 12% and 6% respectively, as opposed to Scotland with 12% in caravan and 6% in camping.
In Wales and Northern Ireland, hotel still was the most accommodation selected by people, about 49% and 45% respectively. Caravan was much often chosen as a dream accommodation(around 30%) in Northern Ireland, almost three times as much as Wales.
In generally, hotel is still the first choice for accommodation for most holidaymakers.
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. 78
- The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in six Gulf countries 92
- The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. 73
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. 61
- The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... holiday in 2010 with 4 different types: self-catering, caravan, camping, and hot...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, still, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24528301887 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22179595052 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3548993624 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180888136555 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759398572694 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126560003519 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131835960104 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159008781077 0.0819641961636 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.