The bar chart below shows the employment of men and women in various jobs in the UK in 2005.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of men and women who work in different types of jobs in the UK for the year 2005.
Overall, the majority of men workers occupied a managerial and senior position and skilled trades while the most number of women were in the administrative and secretarial level.
Men workers engaged in the skilled trades were at its highest percentage of 20% compared to women with only a least percentage of over 2%. For personal services, it was an opposite trend. While female workers were under 15%, male workers had only above 3%. It is noticeable that nearly a quarter of the women were employed to render an administrative and secretarial function.
Another visible comparison is that men occupied the highest position in managerial and senior offices and professional at just over 18% and 13% respectively, in contrast, women had the same level of percentage at approximately 11%. Men who were hired as machine operators and laborers has the same level of women who worked in sales and customer service at over 12%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...tage of 20% compared to women with only a least percentage of over 2%. For person...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'while', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272727272727 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.111111111111 0.116061578633 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116161616162 0.0759168565197 153% => OK
Adverbs: 0.040404040404 0.0366838410393 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0151515151515 0.0131127313244 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.161616161616 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.020202020202 0.0379272487307 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84210554315 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.010101010101 0.0210936926555 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.0948980150116 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0151515151515 0.00967000014798 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1051.0 1161.00487805 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.9 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93785310734 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.337110787985 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271186440678 0.247514529752 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186440677966 0.171178102325 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118644067797 0.112407865282 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84210554315 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.546246751206 99% => OK
Word variations: 46.3327347195 49.3433353143 94% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.125 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0172136916 42.9750493124 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.375 135.714022679 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 49.2436440678 47.7609492067 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.72727272727 2.94281807926 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524222657442 0.418131533498 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.156669268797 0.181151798455 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.133619810369 0.0850326197045 157% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.68281998416 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.249261227472 0.157042692854 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256110292795 0.228904883108 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.210126660846 0.108899403657 193% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35078175243 0.367819155151 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0614233771772 0.0812612215331 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.409549151095 0.316326947829 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175839143343 0.0921553760075 191% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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