The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.
In a number of countries, people prefer to own a home instead of renting one. There might be various reasons behind their choice, such as high renting costs and more stability introduced by house ownership. In my opinion, this is a totally positive situation.
Firstly, some countries are extremely expensive to live. For instance, in Sweden living costs for a small family might exceed three quarters of the family's income. While food and other costs comprise half of the expenses, another half is spent on renting a home. Thus, a plethora of residents choose to buy a house and pay mortgage instead of a renting bill.
Secondly, owning a house brings stability in people's lives. When renting, there are risks of a sudden contract termination. For example, in the case of selling a house, often current renters should move out in a short notice period. In order to avoid such risks, people prefer to buy their own houses or flats.
In my opinion, a choice of owning rather than renting is a positive scenario. There are a plethora of benefits brought by this decision. Among the main advantages are a financial benefit of asset ownership and freedom of an owner to reconstruct and arrange it as he or she wants. Moreover, in the case of moving to a different country, an owner can always let the house to someone else or sell it. Therefore, this decision does not introduce any restrictions, according to my knowledge.
To conclude, behind the preference to buy a house there are the certain comprehensive reasons, mentioned above. I think, that this choice is a good beneficial decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79591836735 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51140671374 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.241951147 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287478367765 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117683358426 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882046772812 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191219527306 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893359424538 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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