The given bar chart depicts the information about the amount of journey in some year for various purpose in a nation by male and female.
Looking overall, it shows the highest data onto work by a male and contrary side the day trip by women purpose lowest figure is given of period.
Commenting with the number of miles travel by make had highest compare to another purpose. However, the number of women in shopping is 26000, meanwhile talking children to school has near about 1000 less. Similarly, shopping and work for a purpose, the volume of men and women is similar which is exactly 30000.
Furthermore, the amount of female on a day trip is 10000, whereas melting friends has more than double it. While the number of male and female in day trip and meeting friends is 6000 and 25000, respectively. In addition to varied significantly in entertainment by men and women, the former has 11000 and later has 15000.
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- The given line graph illustrates the proportion of the total music sold by three different ways between 2011 to 2010 overall it can be seen that the percentage of music sold through download and cds purchased decreased while by stream increased over the g
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'purpose the lowest'.
Suggestion: purpose the lowest
...and contrary side the day trip by women purpose lowest figure is given of period. Commentin...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...with the number of miles travel by make had highest compare to another purpose. However, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75776397516 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48078919583 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 16.9036793332 43.030603864 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.75 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20176732506 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799489415285 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524990517638 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113861789645 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533365139953 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.