The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian man and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar graph gives information about the difference in frequency of doing exercises among Australian men and women in a diversity of age in 2010. Overall, it is obvious that the percentages of females in different age groups doing physical activity was recorded higher than the figures for males, except for the range of 15 to 24 year-old.
It can be seen that for the age group from 15 to 24, Australian men had a higher rate of doing exercises than females’ with the distance of approximately 5%. However, the tendency was reversed from the age of 25 year-old when male’s figures significantly decreased from 52.8% to 42.2% and there was a slight increase in the female’s rate. The trend was magnified in the middle age group.
According to the data given in the chart, the tendency changed for the age groups over 45. The number of men practicing outdoor activity in Australia gradually rose with age, while the figures for females witnessed a flop from 45 to over 65 year-old group. In addition, both 65-and-over-aged men and women had the relative rates of exercise frequency at 46.7% and 47.1%, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91623036649 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83070369675 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560209424084 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9510609236 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172421651472 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906207643157 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532437680118 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133755341074 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656546675414 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.