The bar chart represents the percentage of men and women in Australia in 2010, divided into six age groups who performed physical activity on regular basis.
It is obvious, that overall percentage of women had been higher than men. However, in the youngest age group men exceeded percentage of women who had trained regularly in 2010, and the oldest group shown almost same results for both gender groups.
The men age group 15 to 24 was the most active age group with 52.8 per cent, when age group 35 to 44 was the lowest one with 39,5 per cent respectively. Across the all other groups of men trends were very similar. The women had been peaking in age group 45 to 54 with 53.3 per cent, but group 55 to 64 had a result little bit lower of 53 per cent respectively.
There is clear from the data showed, that gaps between men and women raised in mid-age groups, where difference was about twelve per cent. However two age groups showed opposite results. In the group 15-24, men was more fit than women with 52.8 per cent, when women had only 47.7 per cent respectively. In the age group over 65 years, both different sex groups showed very similar results with 46.7 per cent for men and 47.1 per cent for women.
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The chart illustrates the
The chart illustrates the percentage of australians who did regular physical activity at different ages in 2010.
We can observe that women generally did more physical activity than men at the different ages, except when they were between 15 and 24 years old in which the percentage of men was slightly higher than the women's one: respectively 52,8 % and 47,7 %. Whereas if we take into account the adulthood, portrayed between 25 and 55 years old in this chart, we can notice an exponential increase of women doing physical activity that reaches its peak between 45 and 54 years old: 53,3%. Even if the sharpest gap is depicted between 35 and 44 years old: 13%.
A contrasting scenario is visible approaching to the old age as we can ascertain an increase of physical activity for men and a fall for women. As a result that means a more balanced ratio between the two sexes which is almost equal for those who are over 65 years old. In fact the difference at this age is only of 0,4%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...r cent, but group 55 to 64 had a result little bit lower of 53 per cent respectively. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49099099099 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18620732673 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545045045045 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1104500095 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37269969695 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185942583062 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119372754773 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289912488909 0.15604864568 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136796478049 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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