The given bar graph illustrates information on Australia men and women in various age teams they did regular physical activity in 2010.
To begging, young people they particular age amid 15 to 24 men and women according regular physical activity in order to 52.8% and 47.7%. Secondly, men physical exercise diminished 10.6% and female slightly upsurge 1.2%, ages range between 25 to 34. Thirdly, according to previous look at ages same, but men reduced outdoor activity and women reached the second rocked value is 52.5%, among ages is 35 to 44. In additionally, after 10 years women touched the highest point 53.3% and male candidate around 3.6% rise. Another ten years ages group amid 55 to 64 female members maintain fitness level and male group slightly increase. Last but not least, old ages period both gender balance the yoga activity percentage of 46.7 and 47.1.
To conclusions, in starting age male candidate more enthusiastic in physical exercise, than after female group over take the male person and women more focused in life is exercise. Last stage of life both gender approximately same priority given on yoga activity.
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 89
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'age'.
Suggestion: age
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10695187166 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51118348489 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620320855615 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8439408521 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.375 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32267340935 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13868851441 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105090213092 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234881071441 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11518010543 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.