Many students want to migrate on academic or general purpose. In this era, many folks achieve higher salary or post and better life quality and good environment to move on this side. In this essay, I will discuss why many human move to other land.
First and foremost, human looking for economic and secure job to migrate on other country. In own country have struggled with corruption, dearness, unemployment rate is upsurge this reason to move on better opportunity. There are different amid poor and wealthly lead to rich man more and more rise and poor man also more involved in labor activity. The population also lead to effect on economic growth and unbalance the employment work. For instance, India and China population United Nations prodcast in yearly according 1.2 millions and 3.4 millions rocked population than main impact on starvation, dearness, bound stress other so on. People also looking for bright forecast and higher education and knowledge according match with job. World also combat with pollution diminish and improve air, land and water pollution than better quality of human and animal life survive the planets.
On the flip side, own to preserve human growth than several problem easily solved. Our authorization can enhance the education, business and health service facility and low tex. Country fight against the unbalance environment and illicit. The government create more job opportunity among the people. Government also can stick law apply on the break the rule and plunder men.
To recapitulate, it's rely on own country to which facility or education taught or develop amid the people, therefore people can not move on other land.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'struggled'.
Suggestion: struggled
...e on other country. In own country have struggle with corruption, dearness, unemployment...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...han main impact on starvation, dearness, bound stress other so on. People also lo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'several problems'.
Suggestion: several problems
...side, own to preserve human growth than several problem easily solved. The our authorization ca...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'The' or 'our'?
Suggestion: The; Our
...wth than several problem easily solved. The our authorization can enhance the education...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...velop amid the people, therefore people cant move on other land.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19188191882 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50909485227 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7124313852 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231814621129 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655236584143 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924269898045 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149965125249 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933192611683 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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