This bar chart illustrates the propotion of various age groups of australian males and females who did their physical exercise regulerly in 2010.
First of all, after exclusion of teenager, it can be seen that, women were more active than men among all age groups.
To begin, 47.7 per cent was the rate of physical activity done by female between 15_ 24 years old. "AS" this was lower than male's percentage of same age group, which was 52.8%.
In contrast, in age groups from 25 up to 64 years old, the percentage of females were higher in compare to males.
However, there was significant differiences in percentage of both sex's activities among young adult group, which was 52.5% for females while, 39.5% in males.
Moving to, the last group, 65 years old and over: the percentage of Both, men and women were similarly close to each other at 46.7% and 47.1% respectively.
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 61
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, similarly, while, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91447368421 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54671553998 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664473684211 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9221755197 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301767509172 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134454061538 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893683247722 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148621307218 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904844078661 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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