Now days, people argue that, complete freedom should be given to children, regarding their options on daily life's basis. Meanwhile, others belive restriction should be made on serious decisions. This essay will analyze both views.
on one hand, there are many reasons; why limits should be made to some of their decisions. First of all this age group of population are still immature, as well as, their lack of experience in various ways of life. For example if any person under age of 18, that is to say "child" no judgement will be holded for him/her at this age, regardless, crime was been done.
"As" those children must not given approtunties like those, because they may miss used it. Taking my younger brother as example, when he was achild he has insisted to absence from school, but my parents didnt follow his opinion at all, now he has graduated from college, become a succesfull doctor, can anyone imagine his destiny if he was allowed to make decision like this, at that immature age.
In contrast, allowing children to make thier own choices in thier daily life matters, such as, deciding: what to wear? or what type of food have to eat?. this is will result in producing independent as well as very strong personal traits of those children.In adition to those, recent studies has proven that, self confidance are found in higher rate among these catogary in compare to others.
In my opinion, ithink allowing children to make their own choices will reflect agreat advantages on thier charcters. However, istrongly recomend parent to put limits to serious options.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 61
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is imp 84
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 11
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is imp 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, well, while, for example, in contrast, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00373134328 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58177409427 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671641791045 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0254234274 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166041966066 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586404406685 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610439329851 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939645179827 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430796597136 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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