The chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females of six different age groups (15 to 24, 25 to 24, 35 to 44, 45 to 54, 55 to 64 and 65 and over) who took exercise regularly in 2010.
Overall, it is clear from the bar chart that Australian women were more active at all age groups except younger group in which more female used to do regular exercise in 2010. However, average 50% of Australian people were addicted to do physical activity in 2010.
The proportion of females engaged in physical activity increased as they grew older by the age of 54 and then started to decrease, whereas, a reverse trend was seen in males.
In terms of age group 15 to 24, boys were more active than girls (52.8% and 47.7% respectively), however this trend reversed at age group 25 to 34, 48.9% of women and 42.2% of men did regular exercise in 2010. With regards to age cohort 35 to 44, proportion of Australian females who engaged in physical activity regularly, surged at 52.5%, while, percentage of males reduced 39.5%.
Regarding the age group 45 to 54, proportion of both men and women increased 43.1% of male took regular exercise, while, 53.3% of women, which was the highest proportion of women and men at all age groups, were active. At age group 55 to 64, 45.1% of men 53% of females did regular exercise, however this trend tended to decrease at age group 65 and over, almost same proportion of men and women used to do regular exercise (46.7% and 47.1% respectively).
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in 2010. Overall, it is clear from the bar chart that Australian women were mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58646616541 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50116146913 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462406015038 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6861412822 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434612586106 0.215688989381 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209053283239 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586357181402 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246254509936 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880629313251 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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