The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart visualizes the percentage of male and female who are going daily physical activities of different age groups according to year 2010 in Australia. The minimum age is 15.
The difference between each age group is nine years. In every group the female count is higher than male except 15 to 24 years age group. The 35 to 44 age group men has very least percentage comparing to other. The men and women above 65 age are leveled off.
The 15 to 24 age group men has highest percentage among all groups of make with 52.8% and minimum percentage of min is 39.5% in 35 to 44 age group. The age group 25 to 34 men percentage of physical activity is 42.2% with slight increase in age group of 45 to 54 and furthermore.
The highest female percentage is stacked up between 45 and 54 years age which is 5.3%. And the lowest percentage is above 65 years old. The 55 to 64 years age group and 35 to 44 years age group has tiny change. The female between age 15 and 54 has very similar with age group of 25 to 34.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Australia. The minimum age is 15. The difference between each age group is ni...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...omen above 65 age are leveled off. The 15 to 24 age group men has highest perc...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...ed off. The 15 to 24 age group men has highest percentage among all groups of make wit...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of min is 39.5% in 35 to 44 age group. The age group 25 to 34 men percentage of ph...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...group of 45 to 54 and furthermore. The highest female percentage is stacked up...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27179487179 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3146334358 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430769230769 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3440068522 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365958260949 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165190901809 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946786074153 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278426774954 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851102739931 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.97 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.