The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

A glance at the bar chart provided reveals some striking features of the proportion of males and females in Australia who took part in physical activity on the daily basis in 2010. The figures were shown in various age group.

In general, what stands out from the graphs is that women spent more time on doing physical exercises than men tended to do. However, the youngest age group figure of men (15 to 24) surpassed that of women in the same age group whilst the rest was dominated by females.

In regard to the dominant group in doing physical activity which is the female group, the most engagement was found in the 45 to 54 age group compared to the lowest involvement of the 65 and over age group, at 53.3 percent and 47.1 percent respectively. Moreover, regarding the rest four age group, the older they got, the more time they took to do physical exercises, ranging from 47.7% (the 15 to 24 age group) to 53% (the 55 to 64 age group).

As for males, there was a huge gap between young adults (15 to 24) and the middle-aged (35 to 44), as the recorded figures for the former and the latter were 52.8% and 39.5% correspondingly. Futhermore, with regard to the rest four male age group, the trend was similar to that of female. As they got older, they tended to participate in physical activity to a greater extent, changing within 42.2 percent (25 to 34) and 46.7 percent (55 to 64).

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, so, as for, in general, in regard to, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46456692913 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44097028181 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7039093303 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202668183201 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926488513852 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448205098425 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136997779894 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428138014631 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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