The bar chart provides information regarding the proportion of physical activity that two genders undertake in Australia in 2010.
As the chart illustrates, doing physical activity was more popular among women than men. For example, females who had 25 years old and above showed nearly more interest in exercise than males. By contrast, girls who were in the age group of 15 to 24 did fewer activity than boys that were in the same age group.
Interestingly, adulthood (45-64) was the period that women were significantly more active than other life periods (15-44). Furthermore, the most popular duration for men to do exercise was the ages between 15 and 24. It seems that, males had the lowest tendency to do sport in the ages between 35 and 44 but for females this reluctance took place earlier (25-34).
To conclude, females were notably more eager than males to do physical activities in 2010, and the only age period that doing sport among men were popular was the ages between 15 to 24.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: HAVE_CD_YEARS[1]
Message: This phrase is used with 'be': 'been 25 years old'.
Suggestion: been 25 years old
...omen than men. For example, females who had 25 years old and above showed nearly more interest i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, regarding, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84795321637 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48579975817 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3502555355 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262331075818 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127172135178 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745625576084 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179900335168 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735336496061 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.