The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar graph represents the percentage of Australian men a d women in distinct age brackets who did daily physical activity in 2010.
Overall, women had done more physical activity in every age while the men had done less activity in thier group.The Australian women had teahed on te zentih point in the age of forthy five to fifty four which was 53.3.But there was a less differece in other age groups.
Looking into the details, the percentage of men were below the 52.8 in every age groups. In the age og fifteento forty four the women done physical activities in the range of 52.5 as compared to the men. Only the teenagers has done more activity while the young had not done their activities well. Moreover, the women activities were inclined during their age period. They prefer to physical activities more whereas the men had not done their regular activities.
Jumping into remaining data, the female activities have experienced as the males in forty five to their over age . The percentage of females had skyrocketed but it was decline at the last stage which include 47.1 at last. The males had continue done their activities which was 46.7 at the last age. The number of females activities had increased continuously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fifty-four
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Suggestion: forty-four
...ery age groups. In the age og fifteento forty four the women done physical activities in t...
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...he males in forty five to their over age . The percentage of females had skyrocket...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...ich include 47.1 at last. The males had continue done their activities which was 46.7 at...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...ich include 47.1 at last. The males had continue done their activities which was 46.7 at...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ivities which was 46.7 at the last age. The number of females activities had increa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8672985782 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53601242595 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492890995261 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.1216871946 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349226990149 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154011249813 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126141717923 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265852559911 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151403739585 0.0819641961636 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.