the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of people in different sexes and age brackets partaking in physical activity in Australia in 2010.
As can be seen from the chart, females registered higher percentages than males in all surveyed categories except for 15 to 24 group. Moreover, while young adults aged from 15 to 24 had the highest number (men), it was women 45-to-54 that were the most active.
In particular, almost half of the surveyed females aged 25 to 34 participated in exercising activity, which was 3% higher than that of males. The same gap was recorded in the people in the middle-aged group with a slightly bigger gap of about 7%. While only under 40% and about 43% of males did some exercises in the 35-to-44 and 45-to-59 age groups respectively, it was over 52% of females in those same groups that were recorded. Regarding people older than 65, they registered the roughly same level of participation in both two genders. By contrast, there were fewer teenagers and young women taking physical activity than men did at approximately 17% and 52%.
Interestingly, this was the only group that males number was the highest, before the level of doing exercises fluctuated by age brackets. Moreover, the opposite sex showed high participations with the most energetic and active group being 15 to 54 years old.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, while, except for, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94642857143 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76797234783 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.2612323255 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.8 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259118608179 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102576743487 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789917413924 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172039269575 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730502546401 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.