The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart reveals the percentage of male and female in Australia from various age groups that did scheduled exercise in 2010. Main findings will be compared and contrasted by identifying trends across genders and age groups.
Generally speaking, about two of five Australians that did regular exercise in 2010. Interestingly, although male teenagers have a higher percentage than female teenagers that did regular physical activity, the picture changed surprisingly with female having a higher percentage from the age of 25 to 65 and over. Besides, the proportion of women that engaged in regular exercise reached its peak at the age group of 35 to 64 while the percentage of male falls significantly to around 40% at the age of 25 to 54.
To conclude, as the data suggest, more female Australians did scheduled exercise than Austrailian men and percentage of, ale in Australia that did regular exercise reached its lowest at the age of 25 to 54. This may be due to a variety of reasons including worsening health condition or occupied by heavy workload.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'schedule'
Suggestion: schedule
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07386363636 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88313505007 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6076917659 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311460542784 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141351821899 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889454744781 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210625002526 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431084253387 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.