The bar chart illustrates the rate of Australian genders in various age types who frequently took part in doing exercises during 2010.
It is clear that both elderly genders had the equality of numbers who did exercises, while women outnumbered men were shown from 25 to 64 years old and for the new generation, women much more having those common physical activity.
In the middle and old ages, there was an upward trend and did reach a peak at 53,3 per cent in males sexual, whereas females fell marginally from the middle age group then hit its better recovery at 43,1 per cent. In addition, females from 35 to 44 years old hit its lowest point.
By contrast, the early age group got men outnumbered women counted to approximately 5,1 per cent. Before women hits the lowest point, it is also took the highest proportion at 52,8 per cent. respectively to men at 53,3 per cent. However, in the ended age, people started to reduce their exercising and made a slight drop from 45,1 and 53 to 46,7 and 47,1 respectively. In the other hand, oldest age group remain the same figures for men and women.
- Essay topics: The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations.Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest a 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...women hits the lowest point, it is also took the highest proportion at 52,8 per cent...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Respectively
...he highest proportion at 52,8 per cent. respectively to men at 53,3 per cent. However, in th...
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Line 4, column 386, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the oldest'.
Suggestion: , the oldest
...and 47,1 respectively. In the other hand, oldest age group remain the same figures for m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61734693878 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41543243076 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637755102041 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6297186609 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.555555556 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233550571273 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978850054054 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729864984032 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143056665427 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600906301885 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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