In 2018, China citizens have just hitted a enourmous number at 1.5 million, as you can see from many parts of the world that each nations have their own development in industrial lands and people lifes but in some cases, a shoot up in population has affect and do damage to land of global economic and population systom and the balance of nature. One of the most solution that can be direct into these problems is setting up a worldwide statement from the government and release new law to lead them to the right side of the world.
As is shown from the beginning, the overpopulation can be a hazardous situation ever which causes a lot of affects to the rest of the human lifes such as too many people is borned in a place that could transfer to the lack of foods and not having enough jobs and a competitive salary to pay for them or more importantly is the lost of ecosystom. Ecosystom is playing an essential role for our life and neither plans and animals, it has a natural resource and the unlimited nultritions, over the period of long time ago it still being an area of the mother lung of the earth that in need of protection. If these issues meet each other in meantime when people reach their revolution life to be a better living, it is likely to consume whole things that the world has built and destroy everything that has the potential to stop these problems, and there will no longer for inhabitants to suvive on earth.
According to the fact of this problem, many approaches to tackle the problems have been suggested worldwidely such as provide more lands on the ocean, or construct the building underground or release new law to about the status of the globe population can be in danger and fine the family which break the laws. Obviously making up new laws are one of the best choices due to it remains satisfied the human beings and give people a chance of rescuing their living on mother earth. For example, in China, their government had established the law that forced its citizens not to have over 2 childrens, and it really work wonderfully until now.Furthermore, people awareness has to be firmly and be united to the world and make a better place for their own child.
In conclusion, overpopulation has its own disadvantages to nations, it is the shadow of the worst things that can strongly make it lost of eveything and the solution might not be so powerful and wise enough to solve them. In the late time of future, in each person should have hopes and determined to rise up and to tackle the issue that they build.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'works'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, really, so, still, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 461.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52928416486 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57433013954 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516268980477 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1085293152 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 208.8 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.1 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11795519089 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453233574359 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264162917458 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686223267727 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216432026563 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.71 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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