The given bar chart depicts the information about the male and female aged 60-64 who were occupation in various countries from 1970 to 2000. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
Looking in overall, it is clear that the highest data onto
The USA of the men and women on the contrary side in Belgium by far the lowest figure.
Commencing with the ratio of men and women was 79% and 63%, respectively in Belgium. While the ratio of women in USA countries was 78%, whereas the male has 8% more. It is looked in Japan the gender employed lowest than other. The percentage of name in Indonesia was 84%, as compared to 84 % of the female.
Furthermore, 60% of men and women in Belgium, comprising 8% of the ladies and remaining boy. The varied significantly in Japanese countries men and women, the former has 63% male and later has 47% female. The corresponding ratio of the male and female in Indonesia was 74% and 50%. The proportion of the female decreased from the male in the USA, who was 78% to 45%.
- Some people believe that tourists should accept social and environmental responsibility while others believe that tourists should not accept any responsibility at all To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The chart below shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000 with projections till 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2002 and projections for 2050 73
- When familiy have a meal together It is consider as social activity Do u agree that eating together is important to the people of your country 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., it is clear that the highest data onto The USA of the men and women on the cont...
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Line 8, column 283, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd female in Indonesia was 74% and 50%. The proportion of the female decreased from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56284153005 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55561370113 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535519125683 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8309285394 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147322498459 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530955034538 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410670969546 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771314038987 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404570584446 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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