There is no denying the fact that citizen people more responsibility in living life. Therefore, it is argued issue whether paying fees is more to distribute to the civilization, while on the contrary side that being a resident tremendously duties. I agree with this statement and I will explain my perspective views and opine in the related to upcoming paragraphs.
Commencing with the most salient reason why citizen people have more duties. Owing to they do not spend paying society tax, becomes the reason for conflict among them; Moreover, they are faced many difficult situations in life as, not only paying taxes but also they are serving apartment bills viz, electronic bills, water bills and household basic expenditure. Ergo, becoming in life more impossible condition, instead of they feel exhaustion.
Another worth considering reason is that citizen masses implicate more obligations by receiving money. However, people neither can compete for household expenditure nor concentrate adequately on children studies. Whereas, nowadays they faced inflation in regular life, due to they are not earning more money in the world, since they are not found any occupation. In fact that despite coming in dispersion condition in today time. For example, they are enough to need to job in living life for perfect basic need who should regular life as well as for dispute society bill.
To sum up, despite the heavier condition by paying societies tax. In my perspective, our government should be start enormous business in every country, so every educates people to achieve occupation in the modern era.
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...y perspective, our government should be start enormous business in every country, so ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as for, for example, in fact, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28015564202 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72043157046 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2543375789 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197410151077 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718860745419 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555356031362 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124395494775 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356030123114 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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