The chart shows details about the competency exam pass rate of high school students over 2010 to 2011, figures are in percentage and categorized by subject and gender.
Foreign language, mathematics and computer science have highest pass rate, all shows above 40% students, regardless of gender, successfully completed their tests. In contrast, there are no more than 31% of the students achieved a pass in exams for subject like history, chemistry and geography. In general, female students tend to outperform male students in all subjects except geography, which is the opposite as more than 30% boys passed the test while only 20.1% girls meet the requirements.
Among all the subjects reported, girls who registered in computer science course achieved best performance, with 56.3% passed the final exam. Boys in chemistry class, however, reported worst pass rete with merely 14.1%, which is half of the girls in the same course. It seems like gender doesn’t matter too much in subjects like physics, history, foreign languages and mathematics. But for computer science and chemistry, female did better than male students, the case reversed in geography.
In summary, more students passed the final exam in foreign languages, mathematics and computer science than chemistry, history and geography. In addition, female students have better academic performance than male students in most subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, while, in addition, in contrast, in general, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52534562212 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69486373611 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576036866359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8298456465 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22378880192 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096945343861 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107349701652 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178233221138 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134930985629 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.