The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular contries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The first picture gives information about the number of visits to The UK by foreigners and overseas visits by UK residents over a period of 1979 to 1999. In addition, the second graph presents further details of five overseas destinations favorable by UK visitors in 1999.
Overall, the number of visit by UK citizens constantly succeeds that by overseas visitors during the entire sample period. Though both started from around 10 million visits in the year of 1979, the difference of visits by different categories keep increasing, with an even faster speed since 1989, when overseas visits (30million) is approximately 1.5 times of domestic visits (20million). By the end of 1999, abroad visits by UK citizens accounted for more than double of the visits by foreigners, namely, 53million compared with 25million.
In terms of the bar chart, where the numbers of visits by UK residents to five European countries are given, Spain and France dominated as the most popular destinations with roughly 9 million visits and 11 million visits in 1999. Turkey, Greece and USA, on the other hand, all received less than 5 million hits at the same time. Moreover, the least people from UK have travelled to Turkey, with an approximately 2.5 million visit. In total, these three countries accounted for less than half of the visits in 5 presented countries.
In summary, More UK people travelled overseas than abroad residents visited the UK during reporting period. For the year of 1999, France and Spain are the favorite places of UK citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, in addition, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07874015748 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66492105016 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531496062992 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.114634146341 1745% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3344452077 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.272727273 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419811398392 0.215688989381 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17233762868 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941593025568 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281897351546 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029613450258 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.