The bar chart illustrates the proportion of students who succeeded in their high school aptitude exams, with subject and gender, in a year from 2010 to 2011.
Overall, there is a huge gender disparity in some subjects like chemistry while mathematics has an almost equal percentage of both genders along with foreign languages, physics, and history. In every subject, girls precede in general proportion except in geography. There is another large gap between most passed exams, computer science, and least passed the subject exam, chemistry by 54,2 percent. the reason is related to the difficulties of each subject, I guess.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, i guess, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 532.0 965.302439024 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 196.424390244 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65563551716 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.547539520022 137% => OK
syllable_count: 158.4 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.525151236 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307913127509 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13974895957 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136360202905 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277175040301 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129401228865 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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