The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams by subject and gender during the period 2010 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Students passing high school competency exams, by subject and gender, 2010-2011

The given bar chart illustrates the distinction in the percentage of female and male students passing seven core subjects in their high school between 2010 and 2011.
At the first glance, it is noticeable that there was the equivalent in pass rate for both genders in Physics, History, Foreign Languages ( including French, German and Spanish) and Mathematics as well. Besides that, the feminine students had always finished the test better than the masculine, however geography was an exception.
Initially, the figures for both genders in Foreign Languages and Mathematics were approximately same, with merely 1 percent higher for the feminine. Similarly, the number of Physics and History tests passed by girls was nearly 2 and 2.5 percent higher than that of boys, with 36,7 and 25.6 percent respectively.
On the other hand, for chemistry, girls had a significantly higher pass rate than boys, 30.2 and 14.1%, in turn. Additionally, over 14% more the feminine achieving acceptable score in Computer Science, with a pass rate of 56.3 shared. Specially, Geography was the only subject where males did much greater than females, with a pass rate of 30,4% which was considerably 10% higher than the feminine.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s in Physics, History, Foreign Languages including French, German and Spanish and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, similarly, well, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24742268041 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74120202519 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8232059046 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135190092898 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661062581361 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934663738052 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110592965856 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116357129629 0.0819641961636 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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