The bar chart below shows the percentage of visits to the physician by different age groups of patients in the USA in the year 1995 and 2005.Summarise the information, by selecting and reporting the main features.
The bar chart provides information about the percentage of visitors aged from under 15 to over 75 in the USA in two different years 1995 and 2005.
At the onset, it is clear that the age group between 45-64 was the highest proportion of visitors in both the decade, while the lowest rate of visitors were aged between 15-24 in the two-decade.
Now, turning into the details, the rate of patients aged 45 plus, which accounts for 22.9% in 1995, was considerably lower than the proportion of visitors in the same age group, which makes up 29.4% in 2005. The significant decline in visiting doctor’s chamber had seen in the age group from under 15 to 24 yrs. while in 1995, the rate of underage was 18.9 %, which was slightly dropped by 2.2% in 2005, the difference in the percentage of adults’ visiting was 1.5 from 1995 to 2005. Although the portion of visitors aged over 65 was 13% in 1995, fell to 12.4% in 2005, the percentage of visitors aged 75 over gradually increased from 11.1% to 13.3% over the given period.
Finally, younger people are less frequent visitors during the period of years. In contrast, the portion of patients aged 75 and over had increased slightly.
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of visits to the physician by different age groups of patients in the USA in the year 1995 and 2005.Summarise the information, by selecting and reporting the main features. 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentages of visits to the physician by different age groups of patients in the USA in the USA in the year 1995 and 2005 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature 71
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51996446797 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3881311653 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242367084148 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115986375005 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812376985914 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154498318069 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100978898746 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.