The given bar chart illustrates the manufacturing of the world’s oil in millions of barrels per day in OPEC and non-OPEC countries from 1980 to 2020.
Overall, in the beginning period the there was no oil production in other OPEC while the manufacture of oil was significantly less in OPEC middle east and at the end of the year it was very high. However, the oil making was large amount in non-OPEC per day then compare other.
Firstly, in 20 years of period from 1980 to 2000 the manufacturing of oil was in two countries OPEC middle east and non OPEC and the chart shown that the large amount of production was in non OPEC country while and the production of oil was more than 10 million barrels per day and in the year of 2000 to 2010 the highest production was witnessed show in among all period. However the massive amount of production was saw in OPEC Middle East and the total manufacturing of oil was nearly 18 million barrels in 24 hours.
Secondly, in the last 10 year the making of oil around 17 million barrels per day and the huge quantity of production was in OPEC Middle East
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48756218905 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5207635068 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412935323383 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.8357531442 43.030603864 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.333333333 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258499826894 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168034929677 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748938071658 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196399281058 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700588804626 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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