The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the ratio of English people who lives individually from different ages in England in the year 2011 while the pie chart describes the total count of bedroom in their houses.
Overall, compared to females, the majority of males live alone under the age of 64, whereas females above 64 years are lives individually than males and the majority of them about 35.4% people lives in a two bedroom house.
Regarding the bar graph, about over 60% of males in the age of 25 to 49years lives alone in England. While above 50% males with the age of 16to 24 and 50to64 also choose to live individually. However, more than 60% of older women above 65 years are lived alone in England, compared to men with below 40%. Which in turn only below 50% younger women living alone in contrast to men in 2011.
Over to the pie chart, mere 1.4% people have five or more bedroom house, remaining people have only one bed room or three bedroom with 29% and 28.9% respectively. Likewise about 5.3% people lives alone in four bedroom households in 2011.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rs are lives individually than males and the majority of them about 35.4% people ...
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...ngland, compared to men with below 40%. Which in turn only below 50% younger women li...
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Suggestion: Likewise,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, regarding, so, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6329787234 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26420244693 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1529338325 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 5.23603664747 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324155455996 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153106041131 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694322398248 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200581576365 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066822905604 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.