The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011 The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one person households

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The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.

The given charts illustrate the percentages of women and men in Britain who are living alone by different age groups and give the information about how many bedrooms there are in one-person houses in the year 2011.

Overall, it can be seen that of all ages, the ratio of women living alone was greater than men and a significant difference was seen in the senior citizens. Moreover, in terms of one-person houses, ones with two bedrooms took up the largest proportion and ones with five or more bedrooms consisted of the smallest part.

From the first chart, men aged from 16 to 49 living alone constituted the larger ratio compared to the other gender, however, the figures for both men and women aged 50-64 were alike. In addition, the percentages of females who are older than 64 years old and living alone were much bigger than that of males in the same age range.

Looking at the second graph, people living alone in Britain prioritize houses with two bedrooms over houses with three, one, four, five or more bedrooms; and the figures for five mentioned categories were 35.4%, 29.8%, 28%, 5.3% and 1.4%, respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84536082474 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41347230132 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8450207702 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.666666667 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368006346423 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178240074805 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941673683618 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2231952591 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980429229887 0.0819641961636 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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