The bar chart below shows the reduction in traffic accidents in bridgewater following the introduction of extra lanes on busy roads

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The bar chart below shows the reduction in traffic accidents in bridgewater following the introduction of extra lanes on busy roads.

The given bar chart highlights the reduction in traffic accidents in the bridgewater on five roads by the launching of extra lanes on fussy roadster.

Overall, it is evident that with introduction of extra lanes on busy Street number of accident are decreased in M2 Road.

At the first glance , in M2 roads lowest number of traffic accidents had been reducing with the introduction of extra lane on officious routes. However, M2 and M3 showed the little changed only. That is only 10 per km. Moreover, number of accidents on the M1 and M2 roads are 10 and 4 per kilometre respectively.

As far as trend was concerned, nor the number of accidents highly decreased either with the introduction of extra lane neither increase.Although, accidents all M4 city was being decreased by 6 per km. In addition to this the number of accidents declined on M3 lane was 2 per kilometre respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eased in M2 Road. At the first glance , in M2 roads lowest number of traffic ac...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'roads the lowest'.
Suggestion: roads the lowest
...M2 Road. At the first glance , in M2 roads lowest number of traffic accidents had been re...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...per km. Moreover, number of accidents on the M1 and M2 roads are 10 and 4 per kil...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...oduction of extra lane neither increase.Although, accidents all M4 city was being decrea...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oduction of extra lane neither increase.Although, accidents all M4 city was being decrea...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number of accidents declined on M3 lane was 2 per kilometre respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88157894737 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04325404623 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8888870652 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317583712093 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140895511709 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116655639013 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227284572022 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966790313434 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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