The table shows the results of a survey of average number of cars per hours using three suburban roads during working hours in a ten year pollution monitoring programme . Traffic calming was introduced in herper lane at the beginning of 1

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The table shows the results of a survey of average number of cars per hours using three suburban roads during working hours in a ten year pollution monitoring programme . Traffic calming was introduced in herper lane at the beginning of 1999.

The given tabular chart reveals the information about using of three suburban roads by the average number of cars per hour during working hours in a ten year pollution monitoring programme . Traffic calming was introduced in harper lane at the beginning of 1999.

It can be seen that number of cars per hour on the Harper lane was 82 during the year of 1993 . Siprisingly,with the passage of time number had been inclined gradually but with the introduction of traffic calming cars had been risen . Either , number of cars was to be 600 and cars had been inclined till 2002

As far as trend was concerned,only 400 vehicles was being used by long line during the period of 1993 but, cars continously increases . Although, maximum number of cars in 2002 which was 1400.

Overall, it was evident with the passage of time both great York and long lane number of cars has been raised but, with theintroduction of traffic calming cars has been reduced onHarper lane

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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80722891566 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63485176601 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9960220036 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 1.69756097561 1885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44017715248 0.215688989381 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22540788985 0.103423049105 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142774585391 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295580479157 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218946978655 0.0819641961636 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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