The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.
The given horizontal chart reveals the information about the survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company on two groups of employees; aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60 and shows factors which affect their work performance.
At the first glance, both groups are equally affected by the factor; team spirit. Moving ahead, chance for personal development and relaxed working environment has greater impact on young employees. Moving further, group of elder employees is greatly affected by competition with boss but this group is less affected by job security as compare to young workers.
Apart from this, elder group of employees are more affected by respect from colleagues and is less affected by promotion prospects. Younger group of employees is more affected by job satisfaction and money. Moving ahead, work environment has equal impact on both groups of employees.
Overall, it is evident that group of young employees are more affected by both external and internal factors as compared to elder workers.
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- Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantages 87
- Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance. 84
- Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantages Discuss your views 82
- In many countries, women no longer feel need to get married. Some people believe that some women are able to earn their own income and do not require security a man can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g ahead, chance for personal development and relaxed working environment has grea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67348671802 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567073170732 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6899836307 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339466893882 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143043948496 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174255842018 0.0843802449381 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232078370165 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.21148594594 0.0819641961636 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.