The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a perssonnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.
The bar chart gives information about factor affecting work performance of employees in two groups 18-30 and 45-60.
It is clear that workers between 18 and 30 years old are more significantly impacted by"Competent boss" and "Respect from colleagues" than people aged from 45 to 60. Both age groups are equally affected by factors, namely "Team spirit" and "Work environment". On the other hand, the group aged from 18-30 is impacted more strongly by remainingfactors.
The young employees put "Chance for personal development" as the most important factor to work performance, at more than 80%." Relaxed working environment" and "Promotion prospects" are the other two influential factors which impact significantly, 82% and 80% of employees respectively. "work environment" is given the least importance.
On the other hand as for workers between 45 and 60, "Team spirits" and "money" are considered as the two most important factors affecting their performance. "Job security" and "Relaxed working environment" affect this group the least, with 40% and 25% of employees being influenced respectively.
- The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a perssonnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance. 84
- The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a perssonnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance. 84
- The process below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. 78
- The diagram shows the recycling process of plastics 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and 'money' are considered as the two most important factors affecting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27810650888 4.92477711251 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.1790231449 2.65546596893 157% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.082302205 43.030603864 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.625 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14972888684 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110784754998 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770662718145 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145462860169 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859972713577 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.14 11.4140731707 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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