The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a perssonnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.
The bar chart gives information about the percentage of work performance affected by company factors of people aged between 18-30 and 45-60.
It is clear that workers between 18 and 30 years old are more significantly impacted on "Competent boss" and "Respect from colleagues", the opposite is true for people aged from 45 to 60. The employee on both age groups also are equally affected by different factors, namely "Team spirit" and "Work environment". On the other hand, the group aged from 18-30 is impacted more by remaining elements.
The young employees put the "Chance for personal development" as the most important factor for work performance, at more than 80%." Relaxed working environment" and "Promotion prospects" are two other important factors which impact significantly, 82% and 80% of employees respectively, while the opposite was true for "Work environment".
On the other hand as for workers between 45 and 60, "Team spirits" and "money" are considered as the two most influential issue for their performance. "Job security" and "Relaxed working environment" affect this group the least, with 40% and 25% of employees being influenced respectively.
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- The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a perssonnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and 'money' are considered as the two most influential issue for their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04347826087 4.92477711251 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.00746217348 2.65546596893 151% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.3150375907 43.030603864 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.857142857 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144468884523 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113309412814 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070069920505 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135114417702 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784007080277 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 61.2550243902 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.05 11.4140731707 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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