Essay topics:
The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of worker : those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60,and shows factors affecting their work performance.
The horizontal graph illustrates the information about the results of survey conducted by a personel department at a major company, and the survey was carried out on two groups of workers : those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45- 60, and depicts factors affecting their work performance.
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| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-06-26 | Prabh randhawa | 22 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 33.7804878049 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 245.0 965.302439024 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 47.0 196.424390244 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21276595745 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.6183304987 3.73543355544 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84670557643 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 38.0 106.607317073 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.808510638298 0.547539520022 148% => OK
syllable_count: 71.1 283.868780488 25% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 22.4926829268 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 245.0 112.824112599 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0 22.9334400587 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.676192686722 0.215688989381 314% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.676192686722 0.103423049105 654% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.676192686722 0.15604864568 433% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.2329268293 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 10.3012195122 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.06136585366 137% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.9970731707 189% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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