The given bar chart demonstrates the portion of expenditures for five highlighted categories like food, housing, transportation, healthcare, clothing in five different countries in the year 2009. Housing had the highest share of expenditure while health care and clothing was the least.
People spend more money on housing in United States, which was 26%, that was overall highest in 2009. there was almost same Portion of expenditure in food and transportation, which was 40% and 17% respectively, while healthcare and clothing was under 7%.
Canadian people spend more money on housing and transportation, which makes up 20% each. Whereas almost 5% spend on health care and clothing. Food was sight high that the US. The UK and Japanese people almost spend same portion of money expect transportation and healthcare in which some difference was 5% and 4% respectively.
Overall, it is clearly seen that the highest shares of expenditures in housing, whereas health care and clothing was the least in this all countries in 2009.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... 26%, that was overall highest in 2009. there was almost same Portion of expenditure ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26060606061 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00575511644 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50303030303 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7771699453 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111328075392 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050300325526 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071390455787 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084307011373 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797540304531 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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