The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The statistics of how people in United States, Canada, United Kingdom and Japan shares their total spending on five highlighted categories in 2009 is explained by the bar graph.
As an overall statement, it is worth noticing that Housing accounted for the highest percentage of outlay in all given country except Japan which spent the most on food.
Looking closely at the bar graph, it is apparently observed that Housing, Food and Transportation revealed the highest proportion in four regions. Housing headed the list of consumption in United States, Canada and United Kingdom at approximately 26%, 21% and 24% respectively while Food made up the top-notch in the splurge of Japanese at 23% and Housing stand at the second place with 22%. Although both Transportation and Food was the second and third highest proportion of expenses correspondingly, it shows an opposite trend in the outlay of citizens in United Kingdom when Food is rated at the second place and Transportation was third highest.
On the contrast, markedly different pattern is revealed in the expenses of Heath care and Clothing. Clothing had the most trivial percentage of expenditures in United States with 4%, at the same time, Health care accounted for the second lowest at nearly 8%. The amount of outlay that Japanese spending on Health care and Clothing was the same and it consisted of 4%
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... amount of outlay that Japanese spending on Health care and Clothing was the same...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, look, second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10619469027 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83901198235 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517699115044 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4729779889 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.25 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245834250786 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102763440479 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123325548729 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165848615226 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139384021709 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.